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ctpokа 
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bbg 
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4 августа 2015 г. 21:53 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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цитата LevElena A.Ram
Вот интересно, чего бы он придумал. А то ругаться мы все могём.
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––– Стой, кто живёт! Здесь жить запрещено. Это вас касается, и это не смешно. Тема не в тексте, но в голове у читателя. |
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SAM77 
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5 августа 2015 г. 05:37 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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Да нормально получилось, только сильно кратко , загадочно и непонятно 
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––– Nothing lasts forever, it all will be gone. У тяжёлой железной хтони отобьём ещё миллиметр. |
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LevElena 
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A.Ram 
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5 августа 2015 г. 11:38 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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цитата bbg чего бы он придумал
цитата LevElena чего бы он придумал
да ничего приличного — я же сказал, что 1 штук маловато для расцвета мысли и я вовсе не ругался, просто строка навеяла, а так вполне нормальный финал для зарисовки слабенькой, ежели честно, зарисовки
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––– «Достоинство человека определяется отрицанием очевидного» (И.П. Павлов) «Жизнь - это комедия, написанная садистом» (В. Аллен) |
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A.Ram 
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5 августа 2015 г. 11:40 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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давайте делать лучше!?!
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––– «Достоинство человека определяется отрицанием очевидного» (И.П. Павлов) «Жизнь - это комедия, написанная садистом» (В. Аллен) |
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LevElena 
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A.Ram 
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5 августа 2015 г. 12:38 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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ksGhost LevElena SAM77 bbg A.Ram gamayunov? ты уже кончил дом обшивать? "Где мы будем делать талию? На уровне груди!"(с)
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––– «Достоинство человека определяется отрицанием очевидного» (И.П. Павлов) «Жизнь - это комедия, написанная садистом» (В. Аллен) |
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SAM77 
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5 августа 2015 г. 12:38 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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А кто нить пишет на МП? Блин, меня у же вписали, а я хотел отмазаться, не успеваю с рассказом. Ну ладно 
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––– Nothing lasts forever, it all will be gone. У тяжёлой железной хтони отобьём ещё миллиметр. |
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LevElena 
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gamayunov 
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gamayunov 
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zmey-uj 
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gamayunov 
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gamayunov 
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gamayunov 
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LevElena 
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SAM77 
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ksGhost 
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5 августа 2015 г. 13:45 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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цитата gamayunov я бухой! проститетменя
Пьян в полдень? Распоясалась интеллигенция! 
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––– Ангел часто оказывается лишь демоном, встающим между нами и нашим врагом. Сейчас читаю цикл "Малазанская книга павших" |
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A.Ram 
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5 августа 2015 г. 15:44 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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Может, Ефиму сразу и начинать, пока не выветрилось?
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––– «Достоинство человека определяется отрицанием очевидного» (И.П. Павлов) «Жизнь - это комедия, написанная садистом» (В. Аллен) |
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bbg 
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5 августа 2015 г. 16:00 [нажмите здесь чтобы увидеть текст поста]
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A.Ram А он себя в список не внёс
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––– Стой, кто живёт! Здесь жить запрещено. Это вас касается, и это не смешно. Тема не в тексте, но в голове у читателя. |
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